It reads very clearly, Nat - looking forward to some moving pictures! (and the sound effect of a wet fish hitting a 'chav'). :D
haha i thought you would like the 'chav'- wet fish thing. I was putting together the animatic on my other mac and just got taught a valuable lesson.... had a power cut and it hadn't been saved. Not to worry... its only time that is running out!
I like it, you've got action and camera work all worked out, very good.