Tuesday 10 July 2012

The Ebullient Toadstool @ Phil


I'm finishing off The Ebullient Toadstool, it shouldn't take long and I'm sure somebody will have some paper they don't need now. So I've chopped off the squiggly line at the beginning and here is an idea for the ending.

After the wiggle, a skateboard appears and zooms past him, he watches it, and as it goes off screen he jumps up with excitement and perhaps a WOOHOO and chases after it. Opinion?

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